Vase Sculpture

What you think so far?

If you take a closer look
a careful observation
you see
people with freedom with in
plays with comedy
mostly tragedy
always fighting against fate
know for there dramatic plays
there philosophy was
education was number one
best at artistic things
panting on vases
sculptures of anatomy

~Silent-Rebirth (you kind find me on myspace) the s has two s one on top the other)

What do you think so far about it?

its about Greece

For the most part, I like it. There are a few edits you might want to make...for example, the use of "with" in lines 4 and 5; should it be, "people with freedom within plays of comedy"? or "people with freedom within, play with comedy"? The subtlety of language allows you to phrase it many ways, but if you want a specific concept, it needs to be carefully phrased. Also, the use of "there" when I think you meant "their" (look to lines 8 and 9), and "panting" where I think you meant "painting" in the second to last line.

I might seem a bit picky, but it's a good enough poem to call out what I see as areas you could make better.

nicely done...keep writing

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